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as i roam these loathing streets
fixed upon your crimson trail
the earth below me breaks in two
crushed in half by armored scale

the cities - hear them whispering
a cold wind echoes their unrest
stolen deep within my lungs
and poisoned there now lain to rest

under the crust that I call skin
below the mantle in the fire
immersed beneath a thousand seas
locked away in darkest spire

your spirit lingers tempting me
with tender thoughts that should have been
kneading gently on my soul
allure, entice, you draw me in

with eagles eyes I search for you
unceasingly my splintered mind
snagged by thorny currents- trapped,
against this rock I lay entwined  

left to pain, chaotic thought
I break from weight of all I've sought
like winter clouds in mountains high
I'm lost above the blue-black sky

in demons ash and angels dust
I grip these chains, I taste their rust
broken, brake me, set me free
unenslaved I strive, I want to be

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by N.Reeves (3/10/05)
©2005-2009 ~lightform
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:iconjewpoems:
this is interesting i guess..makes me think of rusty broken things..but i dont get it, whats the emotion behind this? seems like youre beating around the bush maybe? or is that the point? thx
:iconthefajita:
um....unfortually i''m completely numb in the poetry department.....but you might want to fix you're title....it seems to kill what i understand to be the mood of this poem...

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"Thank you for the cookies...my shotgun's in the lake..."
-John Sheridan, very distraught man in a distressing situation
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grievance for a lost love and living with a broken soul
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wow.... i love the piece. It has such a smooth flow to it, and its simple rhyme scheme allows the words and their meanings to flow through, rather than the beat and measure. Im sorry you had to go through the hurt that inspired this...
:iconlightform:
thanks much for the thought :D
I haven't really been writing anything for so long now, seems about time
to get back into it - even if just a little here and there...

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